...And never look down

So, after reading the Watchmen graphic novel, I had a muse to draw and I sketched something up. It's taken practically a month to get this finished, mostly because I kept puting it off, ^=^;; But once I was finished, I thought that it came out pretty well >__>

The scene is supposed to mirror one that is in the actual graphic novel, but the character is Onus, who is based off of Rorschach. ^=^ Yeah.

I know that there are some things that might be anatomically incorrect or something, and if you see it I'd like to know, ^=^ I still have the project file, so I can go and fix it up. I want to improve, and this is my few tries at a graphic novel style. So please feel free to critique this!

EDIT:
I've edited it with, I hope, everything that was mentioned, and I think that it looks at least a little better. I also completed the cut-off curtain and extended it a bit.. >__> Yeah, critique is still welcome! And here's the first version, if you want to compare: [link]

Onus (c) Erin [link]